i think there is too much noise (filter) on this piece
a few comments:
1 structure of buildings are superb but the coloring, i think you could have done it better without the noise.
2 the water is okay, but it lacks depth in terms of the filter you applied (crystalize i think?), oh and instead of doing a filter, you can try adding ripples instead by drawing curved white lines oh and it may be too calm for water ? shrug not sure
3 i think the sakura trees need more depth? and less noise again.
4 clouds look great
5 the building on the right looks like its lineart got blurred even if its a far building, you could just remove some details but still keep the actual line tracing of the key parts
6 reflection on the water is very nice
...good work!!!
greez
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a few comments:
1 structure of buildings are superb but the coloring, i think you could have done it better without the noise.
2 the water is okay, but it lacks depth in terms of the filter you applied (crystalize i think?), oh and instead of doing a filter, you can try adding ripples instead by drawing curved white lines
3 i think the sakura trees need more depth? and less noise again.
4 clouds look great
5 the building on the right looks like its lineart got blurred
6 reflection on the water is very nice
all my 2 cents